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I do love you

by theworldscrewedmeover

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Dear Lindesy,

I do like you ,but I affraid if I open my heart to
you, you’ll break it. I’m sorry for all the heartach I
have caused you. I’m affraid of the pain and heartach. But instead I cause it and I am truly sorry.But know this I love you.
And that I will to take a chance. I want to be with you.

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Average Reader Rating: 2.0 stars out of 5

  1. I do love you

    Blue Eyes That Kill's Buddy Icon Blue Eyes That Kill

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Awe that’s cute!

  2. I do love you

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice work, but the grammar makes it seem a bit choppy. Try some more commas instead of periods to combine sentences.

  3. I do love you

    M. Harper's Buddy Icon M. Harper

    Posted about 1 year ago

    It needs a grammar and spelling overhaul.

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