My Heart Exploding

by Blue Eyes That Kill

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You say you love me and you’re not afraid.
Two days later you say you want to leave this town.
“I’ll go with you.” I say.
“You can’t.” I feel the tears. “I just need to get away.” He sighs and runs his hand through his hair.
“How could you do this to me? Break my heart like this. Get out! Leave, if you must!” He wipes the tears away with his smooth fingers.
“Babe, I’ll always love you.”
“Then why are you doing this to me?”
“Because I love you.”

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Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

  1. My Heart Exploding

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    this reminds me of new moon…. cool story

  2. My Heart Exploding

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    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Yea it reminds me of New Moon too. I Love those books!

  3. My Heart Exploding

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Interesting form of writing, nice work, but it seems a bit choppy, but I don’t know if that’s how it’s supposed to sound.

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