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A Love Story

by theworldscrewedmeover

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The doors open.

She walks the halls.

In a shell she walks.

Her face full of sharrow.

Her thoughts a blur.

Lost in the world around her.

She walks head down.

Tears stream down her face.

Then she looks up to see his face,
Full of warmth.

He takes her face in his hand,
And wipes her tears away.

With the tears he wipes away the pain.

He smiles.

She looks into his eyes,
And knows she’s not alone.

By: Gabrielle Hinds-Richards© 6/14/07

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. A Love Story

    theworldscrewedmeover's Buddy Icon theworldscrewedmeover

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    If spelled something over didn’t use the words forgive me im new at this

  2. A Love Story

    MissJonas1492's Buddy Icon MissJonas1492

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wow that’s really wonderful! i love it!

  3. A Love Story

    theworldscrewedmeover's Buddy Icon theworldscrewedmeover

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is Poem which means I can write the way I want it.

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  4. A Love Story

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is very romantic. I especially like the last few lines.

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