I just read the prequels, and I like the impending feeling of danger you’ve both captured. Thankfully, she awoke in her bed before anything could happen. And hopefully, her day will get better from here on in. Great job! : )

This has turned into a wonderful series. Nice job you two. So now that she’s awake and has deadly morning breath, what next?

wow, what a rude awakening! I love how you wrote very much in Ana’s style of a girl romantically ensnared and infatuated beyond reason.

Yeah, I agree with the Mistress, way to see through a woman’s eye. Very nice.

I’m with Eckhouse? What’s next? :p
I’ll sequel tmw when I’m hopefully not as drained. Great continuation – really proves what you said yesterday, how the story goes in different directions than you expect when someone else sequels. It’s like the story no longer belongs to any one person.