Time Froze When Our Lips Touched.

by Blue Eyes That Kill

We lay in the grass, our fingers intertwined. I want to stay like this forever. The winds blows the flowers, making the air smell fresher than it was before.
The Sun was beating on our faces, giving us a horrible sun burn, but for you, I would get the worst sun burn in the world.
I laugh at all of your jokes you made, even if they were’nt funny. That’s something I do just to make you smile. Seeing you happy lights up my life.
You picked me a flower and stuck it behind my ear.
“Thank you.” I said and kissed you on the cheek. You nod and smile back at me. Kiss me, please. I thought to myself. You never did until you took me home. But, I thought the wait was worth it. Because, when you kissed me it was like time froze.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Time Froze When Our Lips Touched.

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Great descriptive story, nice work.

  2. Time Froze When Our Lips Touched.

    Pockets' Buddy Icon Pockets

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I love stories like this that use phrases that could mean so many things. The freezing of time can be literal or figurative. I decided upon the literal approach in my sequel, just to stir things up a bit.

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