runaway

by LiSteN2MeE11

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He ran across the plains so steady but i had so much tention,
Leaving this place was the only hope for me,
Leaving fast and far away,
The he relised my panic and paced up faster and faster,
Then we hit the forest with great relief,
He paused and steadyed himself,
As i did myself,
But i felt as if i was being watched,
The wind blew fierce as i cried in a soft serene way,
I weeped for my losses and knew i needed to carry on,
Because he was gone,
Forever i needed to run away until i had his soul,
I would never be able to pay,
For my loss,
My love,
My curse is his never to be consouled.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. runaway

    Violette Fleur's Buddy Icon Violette Fleur

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wow, i really like your sequel! thanks so much i really like it!

  2. runaway

    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted 12 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I really like it but check your spelling- realised and consoled. I like to copy and paste my ficlets onto a word document to double check the spelling right before I publish. If I don’t I usually slip on some word spellings too.
    I really liked the emotion in the piece and the connection between the rider and the horse.

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