On His Hands

by [pens&feathers]

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i can hear you whispering to my heart,
even though your lips are sealed.

i will never forget those nights, when,
slowly,
carefully,
silently,
your fingers sought out mine in the darkness,
enfolding me in something more inclusive than an embrace.

and in your hands, then,
i was sure you held something like my future.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. On His Hands

    FlirtingWithaBrickWall's Buddy Icon FlirtingWithaBrickWall

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    beautiful

  2. On His Hands

    Pockets' Buddy Icon Pockets

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Yay, another chance to make use of those ambiguous statements! I got to use the holding of the future for my sequel this time!

    This story is a good example of the mind filling in certain blanks not described. By use of a few choice words, the author describes the scene thoroughly enough to get the point across without wasting space.

    Good stuff.

  3. On His Hands

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    “i can hear you whispering to my heart,
    even though your lips are sealed.”
    I love with my heart and soul, this part.
    i feel like crying

  4. On His Hands

    horrorfan13's Buddy Icon horrorfan13

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is so beautiful. There’s not really much else I can say.

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