Pills

by Ed Fonseca

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Those old pills,
gave Her the chills,
but these new pills,
they gave Her thrills,
even the the strawberry spills,
its juices onto the windowsills,
where she sits,
And spits,
when the taste,
is like the pits

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Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

  1. Pills

    khepa's Buddy Icon khepa

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    nice rhyme.

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    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree, nice rhyme. Good work.

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