In between

by Ed Fonseca

In every word I write,
Every day and every night,
I think of you,
every poem inspired by you,
in my hopes of pleasing you,
and for you to be proud of me,
because to my heart you hold the key.
So don’t be vexed.
Look underneath the text,
and there you’ll see,
a world of love,
more than you can bear.
It’s all there,
In between the pages.
I regret this is all I can give,
this one missive.
I hope it finds you well,
Because you know you’re my belle.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

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    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great work…very real.

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    User 2637's Buddy Icon User 2637

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I loved it ! you made me cry so much! your so stupid! why did you do that? I love you soo much! The guy who wrote this rocks!hmmm… I wonder who he is….;)whoever wrote this must be the most incredible guy in the world! lol I love you whoever this guy is!!!jajajajajjajaja

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    User 2637's Buddy Icon User 2637

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the last girl who wrote forgot to put the five stars! lol

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    User 2637's Buddy Icon User 2637

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    5stars lol!!!!!!!!!!

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    User 2637's Buddy Icon User 2637

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    User 2637's Buddy Icon User 2637

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    5 freakin stars!!!!!!!! jajajaja

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    User 2637's Buddy Icon User 2637

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Im so proud of you! :)

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