Sunset yellow

by Ed Fonseca

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You say you wanna be yellow,
then I must say yellow is the new color,
with which I shall paint my world,
the earth, the skies, even the seas,
shall all be colored,
why, even the peas,
All will be yellow,
In accordance to the unwritten law,
the law my universe follows,
since it revolves around you,
since it does,
I’ll make sure,
that we get to see everything yellow,
especially that romantic settin’ sun,
but we must catch it quick,
before it’s gone

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Sunset yellow

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow I really love this, romantic without being sappy, which is the best kind of romantic.

  2. Sunset yellow

    SunEyedGirl's Buddy Icon SunEyedGirl

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Very good, it makes me think of coldplay ( a little influence pehaps?) but nevertheless a really good poem. I like the line “then I must say yellow is the new color with which I shall paint my world” really touching and sweet… good job!

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