Self Knows Self

by l.m.orchard

I sat at a bus stop a few blocks from my old apartment, waiting. I’d fended off a handful of half-hearted self-assassination attempts along the way, a manifold practical manifestation of the doubts I felt toward what I was about to do.

Soon enough, at around ten after nine, I came walking briskly down the sidewalk. I was on my way to catch the 9:23 bus to work, late as usual. As my younger doppelganger drew near, I hauled myself up and blocked the way. Nonplussed, I tried walking around myself, but I grabbed my other by the shoulders.

I tore the headphones from my head and leveled a glare at myself over the rims of sunglasses, but an instant spark of recognition nullified any words of protest.

“Yes,” I said. “You know.”

Nerd that I was – and am – I’d dreamed often enough about meeting some alternate version of myself. Largely unconscious, a gestalt of body language was enough to settle any skepticism – self knows self.

Wrapped in sudden trusting awe, however, I was far too naïve and unguarded to run.

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    khepa's Buddy Icon khepa

    Posted 10 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    good one, like it except the big words. I think you can do without those.

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    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great work, this one of the best stories I’ve read in a while.

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    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 4 months ago

    Whoa. I like this, and scifi isn’t exactly my thing. I really do like this, though. Quite brilliant, I think.

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    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great work with this one, I like it. “half-hearted self-assassination attempts”... brilliant. Good job.

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    White Hat's Buddy Icon White Hat

    Posted 3 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    This is why time travel is illegal in the future…

    But I shouldn’t have told you that.

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    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    this is a very good story. well done!

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    Scarlett's Buddy Icon Scarlett

    Posted 2 months ago

    I dont get it :/

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    mmmarmalade's Buddy Icon mmmarmalade

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Intriguing. I like it.

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    Lovely's Buddy Icon Lovely

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I can probably quote you on the whole thing! Well done.

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    Posted 23 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Quite the interesting story here. Very well written and intriguing.

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 21 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I came across this in the “most popular” list and I just had to click on it because I couldn’t fathom a story two months old would still be on said list. After reading it, I think I can better understand why now. This is fascinating.
    LoA

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    Tad Winslow's Buddy Icon Tad Winslow

    Posted 21 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I think it’s funny (ha ha) to question yourself outloud “yes?” and answer “you know.” why even ask. I’m assuming this person is as eccentric as a neon tie.

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