The End of May

by Pearls and Formaldehyde

“How’s your burger? Hopefully better than mine…” Mike muttered, eyeing the McDonald’s double cheeseburger with slight disgust. But he took another bite, probably for my sake. I was the one who liked McDonald’s, not him.

“Just as good as always, I guess,” I muttered, taking another bite of my Big Mac.

“That’s the last burger you’ll ever have,” he grimly stated.

“Yeah, I know…” I had been trying to avoid thinking like that. Leave it to Mike to remind me I was going to be dead in less than a year. Suddenly, I felt sick to my stomach, and couldn’t finish eating so I put it back in the red cardboard box and started sipping my cola.

The look on my face must have been bad because he put his burger away and wrapped an arm around my shoulders, pulling me closer. Softly, he kissed my shortly cut black hair.

“I love you, May,” he murmured.

My blue eyes caught his brown ones in the dying sunlight, and the coming tears choked my words. Life is so unfair.

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    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Ooooo. Sequels planned?

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    Frostbite's Buddy Icon Frostbite

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    O.O wow yeah I hope someone continues this :)

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    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great work! I’ve been reading your others, and they’re good as well. Keep at it!

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    T.F. Torrey's Buddy Icon T.F. Torrey

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great conveyance of mood, and I like the infusion of undiluted colors.

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    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is intersting…it deserves a sequel but I’m scared to ruin what you have going!

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    [pens&feathers]'s Buddy Icon [pens&feathers]

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow. So tragic. Wonderful job.

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    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice.

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