Retirement

by khepa

It was his last day at work. The new decree from the palace was announced today. He, the ultimate executioner of the Kingdom, known for his swift, clean slash of the sword, will be replaced by a machine. Few days ago an expert of this so called precise machine was brought in from far away. There is no need for his ‘inhumane’ delivery anymore. The majestic council found this new method more efficient and cost effective. And the crowd always likes modern, innovative techniques.

His last assignment involved a young man. The plight of the poor victim is none of his concerns. However, today he paused for a moment, looked carefully at his prey. As the victim was approaching the platform, he moved away, suddenly jumped with his sword. He pulled out his hood, the crowd cheered. This is the first time they saw those red blooded eyes. He didn’t waste a single second anymore. A sudden whish. That famous blow spilled blood for the last time. The crowd was silenced as they witnessed a great feat of self decapitation.

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    Aspiring_reader's Buddy Icon Aspiring_reader

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Perhaps I’m being naive but once more the final twist caught me by surprise. Do take care though that it doesn’t become a mannerism just for the sake of it—it certainly hasn’t yet, and I love your stories!

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    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great stuff!

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    Samantha Woodland's Buddy Icon Samantha Woodland

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Sweet story! And linux pwns by teh way. heh.

  4. Retirement

    MzScribe's Buddy Icon MzScribe

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This story has a way of making you feel sorry for an executioner.
    nicdely done

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