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Survival of the Fittest

by Charles Andrew Bates

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  1. Survival of the Fittest

    ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫'s Buddy Icon ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫

    Posted 2 months ago

    Good one dude!!
    We sorta had the same idea, hehehe..
    I also wrote one from the Wife’s POV .

    But your ending is a bit of a surprise.
    Good Sequel.

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    Wil Wheaton's Buddy Icon Wil Wheaton

    Posted 2 months ago

    This is such a terrific continuation of the story, Andrew. Great job!

  3. Survival of the Fittest

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    great last line! she’s a brave woman! this could almost follow ALRO ’s too. :P

  4. Survival of the Fittest

    Will Hindmarch's Buddy Icon Will Hindmarch

    Posted 2 months ago

    So good.

  5. Survival of the Fittest

    Will Hindmarch's Buddy Icon Will Hindmarch

    Posted 2 months ago

    And, hey: Welcome to Ficlets, Bates!

  6. Survival of the Fittest

    Charles Andrew Bates' Buddy Icon Charles Andrew Bates

    Posted 2 months ago

    Thanks, Will! Laziness and procrastination could only hold me off for so long. Good to see you on here, too.

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    RainDance's Buddy Icon RainDance

    Posted 2 months ago

    This is heartbreaking… I can’t stop reading.

  8. Survival of the Fittest

    Blak Mamba's Buddy Icon Blak Mamba

    Posted 2 months ago

    wow,that crazy,and it held my attention till the end,good work

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    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 2 months ago

    Hah! That is one awesome first ficlet, dude. Very nice. I especially liked the last line!

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