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Creep (sentence Challenge)

by Bartimaeus

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I sat there as a single, angry tear burned down my cheek. I was in my closet, just as i’d been many times before. I locked myself in and threw myself on the floor, my fists clenched tightly. I pounded the floor, the wall, and anything else worth pounding.
I only stopped pounding when I had an epiphany.

I don’t care… I honestly do not care…

I felt a wicked grin spread across my face. I began laughing a creepy, sick laugh as I started looking for a pair of scissors. I finally found them; they were under my bed, where I’d thrown them the last time I used them. I felt the wicked smile growing even larger across my face. Part of me was sickened, but the majority of me loved it. Loved it for hating myself.

I don’t care anymore…

I stabbed, stabbed as hard as I could. Somehow the pain didn’t satisfy me enough. I wanted more, much more. I was enraged, and began looking for a box of matches. When I found them, I lit my bed and jumped in, letting the heat envelope me.

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  1. Creep (sentence Challenge)

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 2 months ago

    i..i.. i’m honestly… i don’t know what to say. well i do, just not on here…
    ~
    it’s actually amazing. I can almost feel the angry inside of him, and the insanity ((for lack of a better word)) taking over. thanks fer entering!

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    wytherwings' Buddy Icon wytherwings

    Posted 2 months ago

    oh my god… wow…
    amazing

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    g2 (la pianista irlandesa)'s Buddy Icon g2 (la pianista irlandesa)

    Posted 2 months ago

    That is amazing and oddly disturbing. Wow. I’m on the same page as band baby…

  4. Creep (sentence Challenge)

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    this is very insane! It’s amazing what happens when you don’t care.

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    Music-Hearted's Buddy Icon Music-Hearted

    Posted 2 months ago

    Wow.

    I’m with band baby… you can feel the intense energy just emanating from this ficlet. fantastic.
    LoA

  6. Creep (sentence Challenge)

    Music-Hearted's Buddy Icon Music-Hearted

    Posted 2 months ago

    Oh, and I forgot to say, the title reminds me of the song by Radiohead. Which is awesome.

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    Bartimaeus' Buddy Icon Bartimaeus

    Posted 2 months ago

    yea, that song is why i chose the title

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    chakatreatmentson!(LoA)'s Buddy Icon chakatreatmentson!(LoA)

    Posted 2 months ago

    This guy clearly does not know what the hell he’s doing here, so the title is immensely appropriate….is he getting gratification out of hurting himself or destroying stuff? This is an important distinction(for me at least), cuz busting up junk is a pretty good safety valve , messing yourself up indicates some real pathology, and I’m curious to know what is going on here.

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    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted 2 months ago

    Leo, my friend, you have succeeded in making a serene person want to slam a hole in the wall. Well.. nearly serene. Almost like the story is alive. This is brilliantly done.

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