He had to watch her walk away,
Because she didn’t hear what he had to say.
Ick, my couplet kinda stunk; let’s try that again
In the eaves of night,
When beauty was hard to find,
She stayed beside him.
Personally, I think my haiku was better
Inspired by
My fellow ficleteers, (say that twelve times fast its fun!)
In all my long life, all twelve years of it, I have only read _…A sequel to TRUE LOVE CHALLENGE (TLC)
About the author
Merlot Wystine
The Wild
So, as it were, I am fond of many things, none of which I will tell you about.
Fine, I’ll tell you this: I like to write stories, some of which are filled with dark humor.
Published on October 02, 2008.
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