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Little Monster (People's Choice Halloween Challenge)

by OrangeOreos

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“ AAAAAAAAAH !“

“EEEEEEEEE!”

“OH MY—”

And that was when I crushed him, cutting off his words in his throat before they even had a chance to blossom into their full form!

My sharp, pointed form speared the hearts of all with fear. Even the bravest couldn’t help but tremble as their last moments drew near underneath the sole of my giant paw.

Buildings doubled over in pain whenever I punched them in the gut. Helicopters couldn’t fly high enough to get over my hideous head! I pierced the heavens and spilled out all the angels with the devilish horn sprouting from my skull!

I crushed the angels just the same as the humans, even as they wondered how this being could be almost as great as God.

But they were wrong! I WAS GREATER !

The deaths doubled exponentially, and my deadly wake spread through the entire world!

I had the last human underneath my sole! My leg raised, shrouding him in a chasm of fear—

“BIL-LY! Stop playing with those blocks and come finish your dinner! You’re acting like a monster!”

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  1. Little Monster (People's Choice Halloween Challenge)

    chakatreatmentson!(LoA)'s Buddy Icon chakatreatmentson!(LoA)

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Awww , very cute. I used to love wearing giant platform shoes because I always have pictured myself as a godzilla-type giant monster laying sqishy destruction on a major city. The platforms give you that”head in the clouds” sensation. I totally identified with the kid.Great story!

  2. Little Monster (People's Choice Halloween Challenge)

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted about 1 month ago

    very cute, well, menacing and dark too, but you’ve got the boy sitting, playing at the end. :P way to twist the horror!

  3. Little Monster (People's Choice Halloween Challenge)

    NightMaiden's Buddy Icon NightMaiden

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Haha, I loved this entry. Kids with lots of imagination can transport themselves, and I think that’s great. I agree with Elsha – way to twist the ending. : )

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