Calm in the Mind

by Suburban Saint

Suddenly, with the angel in my arms, the clouds depart. The steadily easing patter of the rain slows and stops till the porch is filled with only us and an unnerving silence. Lightening my grip, I look up and around. The roads ahead are clear, and the remnants of the storm sparkle in a blindingly beautiful sun. Grass and sky become the most vibrant greens and blues, almost pulling you out into their warmth.
Without realizing it, my arms slip off of her. Taking a step towards the edge of the porch, I look down at this new path I could take. From within the whirling winds of the storm, the only haven appeared to be right before me. But now, when all has become calm and the true scenery has its chance to sink in, all roads appear to lead to a life of content.
Looking back at her, I realize what I would be losing by taking another step. Unsure of my deepest desires I hesitate. Fearing the loss of my angel and the loss of my possibilities simultaneously, I close my eyes, and take the first step.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. Calm in the Mind

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, this is one of the best stories I’ve read so far. You illustrate the moment beautifully, showing that sometimes you need to let go to move on to better things and that new paths emerge after hard times. Great work.

  2. Calm in the Mind

    Suburban Saint's Buddy Icon Suburban Saint

    Posted about 1 year ago

    chuck – thanks man, i’ll do my best to read some of your stuff asap

  3. Calm in the Mind

    DisassociatedWord's Buddy Icon DisassociatedWord

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is even better than the prequels to it. Just great man. I especially like the last sentence.

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