Beautifully sparse, reads very nicely

Very well done. It nicely illustrates the opposite side of human nature, in contrast to the mosquito.
Gets the point across – sometimes less words can mean more…

I think it’s great how this is the opposite of the previous poem. One describes the ugly things in life, and one describes the beauty of it all.

I agree with OO. The descriptive words in the begging really made me feel something, and it was wonderfully read.

Beautiful and eerily accurate description of, or shall I better say metaphor for, human life. Great work.

And to think, I don’t generally like doing poetry. Thanks for all the positive comments, guys.