Uncomfortable meetings

by Mrs. Fitzwilliam Darcy

I hadn’t seen him in ten years. That was probably for the best because if I had seen him sooner, I would have strangled him.
You understand. Bad ending.
It involved me finding him in bed with another woman, a thrown engagement ring, a suitcase shoved full of some of my stuff, a few more nasty words, and a slammed door.
I saw him in a coffee shop early one morning before catching my train to go to work. How the hell he ended up in my side of town, I don’t know.
“Rae? Is that really you?” I heard a familiar voice say behind me.
“Shawn. Long time no see,” I grimaced.
“Wow,” he looked me up and down, “you look incredible,” he said impressed that at age 33 I still looked like I was in my 20s. He didn’t. Hah.
“Thanks.”
“Look, Rae, I really want to catch up with you. I still think about you…” he began. The woman behind the counter interrupted.
“What can I get for you?”
“Triple shot of espresso over ice.” I ordered, “Maybe if I run into you again.”
“Ok…see you soon?” he whimpered.
“Maybe.” I left.

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  1. Uncomfortable meetings

    Violette Fleur's Buddy Icon Violette Fleur

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i really like this. it really has a deep, strong meaning that reaches below the surface. great job, i really like it!

  2. Uncomfortable meetings

    C. Davida's Buddy Icon C. Davida

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love this piece, darling! My favorite part is, “You understand. Bad ending.”

    You have a knack for keeping the reader engaged and capturing moments that we all can relate to, on one level or another.

    Teach me how to write like you! Pretty pretty please!!

  3. Uncomfortable meetings

    SunEyedGirl's Buddy Icon SunEyedGirl

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I really like this because instead of having a wimpy ending it has a really empowering yeah-you-dont-have-to-take-that-sister ending. Good job! : )

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