The numbers were so seamless.. looks like a challenge here.. story by numbers..

Great job. I was instantly reminded of Chris McCandless.
If the ratings were working (ahem, Kevin Lawver) it would be a five.

intriguing. i like it. very well said. =)
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i think you mean “there were five of us on that expedition.” in the third paragraph. =D

Wow, I didn’t even notice the sequence of numbers until I read it the 2nd time. Seamless is right.

great work as always. I liked the infinity after 10.

I tagged it with ‘newchallenge’ just cause of SKermitgorf’s comment and the way he did a sequel. Just thought I’d help open it up and give him some competition.

ditto PyroPunk. I liked this a lot.
LoA