first crush

by upintheclouds

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It’s the new kid,
Or the football player,
Or the math wiz,
Or book worm,
That makes your
Heart flutter.
You like his smile,
Or his aura,
Or his intelligence,
Or his talent.
He walks by
You in the hall,
And you think
You’re about to die.
He says hi to you
In math, and your
Voice disappears,
Like a coin, secretly
Hidden, hiding until
The exact perfect moment.
He asks you about
The book your reading,
And you find yourself
Forgetting the lines
You’ve rehearsed in
Your mirror only days
Before.
You fear that day
Will never come,
Where he’ll ask you out.
But you hope and
Dream anyway.
But when the day
Comes, where he,
The football player,
Or the math wiz,
Or book worm,
Walks toward you
In the hall, when you think
You’re going to suffocate.
But your breath comes
Back in hot steams,
When you realize,
It’s your bestfriend
That he wants to ask out.
You think how could
I ever have liked him,
And how you judged
Him so wrong.

He your
first crush.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. first crush

    Violette Fleur's Buddy Icon Violette Fleur

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i really like it! That’s exactly how i felt when i had my first crush. a bunch of people could definitely relate. great work!

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    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I liked the first part of this. I felt compelled to read it aloud, and that’s a good thing. It wasn’t enough to just read it, I had to hear it because I couldn’t get enough! I really related except to the whole best friend bit…I, fortunately, have never experienced that, but the basic idea that it’s not you he likes. I loved that it wasn’t a happy ending, because they don’t always happen in real life. And this is a very real idea. Fantastic work.

  3. first crush

    TotallyNOTBlonde's Buddy Icon TotallyNOTBlonde

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    this is cute. It does remind me of my first crush! sigh

  4. first crush

    //miss mia//'s Buddy Icon //miss mia//

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    thats really good. i think the best part was how the ending wasn’t wat she wanted, but deep down, it was. : ] good job.

  5. first crush

    llamaluvsmenotu's Buddy Icon llamaluvsmenotu

    Posted about 1 year ago

    i luv it more then a barrell of potatos

  6. first crush

    MissJonas1492's Buddy Icon MissJonas1492

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    ooo its really good. i liked how it’s only like two or three words on a line, it adds a little more feeling to it than if it had been all in one sentence. great!

    btw, its aura, not ora. but great story!

  7. first crush

    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    that was really good, sad, but hey that’s life!

  8. first crush

    cracks in a sidewalk's Buddy Icon cracks in a sidewalk

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wow, i can totaly relate, and all i have to say is, ouch. so sad and so true like life and i love the way its broken up. awesome.

  9. first crush

    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    omygosh who honestly CANT relate? that is reaaaally god at capturing…i dont know…everything? anyway, great job!

  10. first crush

    BetwINeen's Buddy Icon BetwINeen

    Posted about 1 year ago

    very true to life

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    poppin.

    ♥

    =)

    luvvved it.

  12. first crush

    HeartlessAngel4LYFE's Buddy Icon HeartlessAngel4LYFE

    Posted 12 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    very pretty and sooooo true!! great job…

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