Dancing

by polka dot

A remix of an old Beyonce song was blasting from the stereo as Corrine and her friends danced in a circle. She couldn’t actually hear the music, but she knew it was there. The lights were low and she couldn’t tell who was who. Actually, she could barley see two inches in front of her face. All of the sweaty bodies on the dance floor formed into one big mosh pit. Corinne flung her hands above her head and began jumping around. The club smelled musky and stale. Corinne looked down and realized she could probably wring-out her sweaty tank top, so she shoved through the dancers to go grab a water.

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  1. Dancing

    polka dot's Buddy Icon polka dot

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This one definitely needs a sequel, but i couldn’t really think of anything…Please write a sequel!

  2. Dancing

    llamaluvsmenotu's Buddy Icon llamaluvsmenotu

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    omg gay!!!!!!

  3. Dancing

    polka dot's Buddy Icon polka dot

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    If you’re going to be so rude, please keep your comments to yourself.

  4. Dancing

    polka dot's Buddy Icon polka dot

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    LOL alexis u stink

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