Will you remember me?

by atomic heart

Will you miss me when I’m gone?
Or will you keep living your life
Just like nothing ever occurred?
Why can’t I see today how you will feel tomorrow?

Will you miss me?
Will I be just a bad memory of the past,
A freak who couldn’t take it any longer,
Or will you remember me with joy in the soul?

I’m going to miss you.
now, and for all days to come,
I sure can’t hide my feelings for you,
My heart hurts like nothing else.

I’m almost gone now;
Soon I’ll be gone forever,
And then you might see what I felt.
But then it will be to late,
Since I won’t be there anymore.

You were the dream of my life,
Sadly all dreams must end;
As the sun peaks over the trees,
The dream starts to fade

I could try to forget you.
Perhaps I should try, but it won’t work.
I’ve tried so many times;
But it doesn’t matter, I can’t forget you at all.
I will never forget you.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

  1. Will you remember me?

    SunEyedGirl's Buddy Icon SunEyedGirl

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    very good, very real, the emotion is good, keep up the good work : )

  2. Will you remember me?

    Suburban Saint's Buddy Icon Suburban Saint

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    single gripe: the last line in the third stanza, its unneeded. other than that, its pretty good.

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