Right back for more

by SunEyedGirl

Climbing to the top I feel it all in my hand
Waiting for the stop, I think I’ve had all I can
But here I am right back for more
Into your heart I’d trade the world for a tour
Waiting, trying not to let my heart have a dream
No more crying, letting my light just beam

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Right back for more

    khepa's Buddy Icon khepa

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    nice rhythm.

  2. Right back for more

    Frostbite's Buddy Icon Frostbite

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Please, can I have your poem skillz ? Haha I like it as always, though its almost like it doesnt keep a steady tone, not sure if I’m reading it wrong…

  3. Right back for more

    Frostbite's Buddy Icon Frostbite

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    And having read it again, it makes sense now. Lol. Work = bad for thinking.

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