Science Fiction...ey (Part 2)

by Frostbite

Stardate 2764-159, 21:17 Earth Time. Somewhere near the planet Rathos.

We had watched in horror as 7 of the 9 ships we had were turned to mere space debris in a matter of seconds. The Intrepid, a small frigate, never made it through the first hyperspace jump, and came out the other end a tiny compressed ball of metal, no more than 2ft around. Faster-than-light space travel can do strange things.

The Corvatti battle cruiser, on the other hand, had followed us flawlessly, and as the black and red hull emerged from the hole in space, it wasted no time in firing off a series of short, devastating blasts that ripped our engines completely apart.

“Prepare for emergency planetary landing.” Said the calm, collected voice of the ship’s computer. It knew not the human emotions befalling us. Men were crying as the ship broke the atmosphere, barreling toward the planet’s gray surface.

I will try to continue this historical record as long as possible. My name is Ensign Mark Glaive, and (DATA STREAM INTERRUPTED )

Comments

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  1. Science Fiction...ey (Part 2)

    SunEyedGirl's Buddy Icon SunEyedGirl

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Very good, I feel like I’m watching star trek. I’ma call you Cap’n Kirk : )

  2. Science Fiction...ey (Part 2)

    Frostbite's Buddy Icon Frostbite

    Posted about 1 year ago

    I always liked Star Wars better, but ok lol :)

  3. Science Fiction...ey (Part 2)

    MeAndTheMoon's Buddy Icon MeAndTheMoon

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I like this a lot! while i also prefer star wars, something about this is rather trekky but it doesn’t take away from the cool factor.
    Color me amused

  4. Science Fiction...ey (Part 2)

    A Joker's Buddy Icon A Joker

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    It feels real. Good stories always feel real.

  5. Science Fiction...ey (Part 2)

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is great, and I like the interrupted ending.

  6. Science Fiction...ey (Part 2)

    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    owch. okay. no really i like the ending.

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