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Final Farewell

by YodaOnCrack

The next morning Mr. Jeffries awoke at 6:00 a.m. and went
through his usual routine. He brewed some coffee, placed
the unopened mail on the countertop, and reached for
George’s food dish. As he emptied the remaining bits of
dog food from the dish, he was surprised to see Hahona at
the door.

“It’s George, Mr. Jeffries. The children saw me leaving your
house and they followed me back to the clinic. They wouldn’t
let me do it. We’ve all been with him the entire night, and I
think he may just make it.”

“But how? You said that-”

“I know. I know. I was wrong.” said Hahona.

“Sit down. Would you like some coffee?” asked Mr. Jeffries.

It took three months for George to recover. And when he did die many years later, Hahona and Mr. Jeffries buried him on high ground, New Zealand’s Mount Egmont towering above.”

“There is an old Mäori proverb, Mr. J. Mehema koe ka tuoho, meinga ki te maunga tetei… Translated it means – If you should bow to greatness, let it be to the lofty mountain.”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Final Farewell

    Laine the Grey's Buddy Icon Laine the Grey

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great, great finale.

  2. Final Farewell

    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted about 1 year ago

    I struggled with how to end this one with a twist, but I kinda like how it turned out. Comments (good or bad) welcome – thanks for yours, Laine…

  3. Final Farewell

    FlirtingWithaBrickWall's Buddy Icon FlirtingWithaBrickWall

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    this is the best finale ever!!! (though a zombie dog would have been pretty awesome, too) good job bringing it all the way through, that’s normally pretty hard for me, but you always manage to finish it off. nicely done.

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