New Friends

by SunEyedGirl

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Something new
The way they just sat there looking out the window…
like I do
Who were these strangers
And why did they look so happy??
I was not amused
They smell funny… really funny… but I like it
Oo it smells like moms perfume
Yeah… yeah thats what it smells like
oh crap
Water and procelain were all over the floor
My strange new friends were just lying there
I couldn’t leave them like that
I put them in my mouth and we ran for Tommy’s bedroom

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. New Friends

    BARomero's Buddy Icon BARomero

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This goes great with the picture! My one criticism is that you start out with the flowers being one entity and finish with them being two?

  2. New Friends

    Frostbite's Buddy Icon Frostbite

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Thats adorably cute lol. It does go great with the picture. Awesome job.

  3. New Friends

    MeAndTheMoon's Buddy Icon MeAndTheMoon

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    awwwww his friends are the flowers!!! hehehe

  4. New Friends

    //miss mia//'s Buddy Icon //miss mia//

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    i love that!!!!!!! it is amazing to me how i have seen that picture so many times and never was inspired by it… and you were inspired to write a story about it. wow. and such a good story. that went together perfectly. lol and i think it gave a pretty good excuse for a cat. maybe cats aren’t always tearing things up for no reason. maybe the spider that my cat ate yesterday wanted to explore the inside of my cat so my cat, doing a favor for the spider, ate it???

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