The Water's Edge

by T.F. Torrey

At the edge of the lake, the killer leaned down, grabbed the tarp firmly in his fists, and pulled the body up over the gunwale into the rowboat. Something heavy thudded against the thwart, and the tarp looked bent at an odd angle, but it was good enough for the short trip to the middle of the lake.

Before loading the heavy rock, the killer looked around carefully. Color drained from the landscape as the sun set out past the wooded horizon. He could smell the muck and mud. A chorus of peepers chirped among the cattails in the marsh to the right. All was quiet and calm.

As he wrestled the rock into the boat, he thought how this had become routine, and as such a bit boring. He wondered if he might improve this part of the plan. Instead of the quick dump-and-run, maybe he could smoke a clove cigarette here at the water’s edge, maybe read a poem. Yes, that might bring a little excitement back to the routine.

Then, as he stepped into the boat, a hand rose from the black water and seized his ankle in a bony grip.

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    [pens&feathers]'s Buddy Icon [pens&feathers]

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Chilling! And lovely descriptions.

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    BARomero's Buddy Icon BARomero

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Moody piece. And how quickly the predator becomes the prey! Well done! Looking forward to more…

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    jinn's Buddy Icon jinn

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    you should write the sequel,,,id love to read it,,,

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