SMOLDERING(not really a story or a poem, more of an observation)

by MeAndTheMoon

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Eviromentalists have been screaming at me
TURN OFF YOUR LIGHTS
RECYCLE
USE LESS TOILET PAPER (ew!)
But I didn’t realize anything was wrong
Until one day I breathed in and smelled something reminicent of the beach when I was a little kid
And then I realized it was a faint cigarette smell floating in the summer breeze
So that’s what reminds me of the beach
The world is going down

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. SMOLDERING(not really a story or a poem, more of an observation)

    Laine P. Grey's Buddy Icon Laine P. Grey

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Lovely.

  2. SMOLDERING(not really a story or a poem, more of an observation)

    SunEyedGirl's Buddy Icon SunEyedGirl

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Yesss…

  3. SMOLDERING(not really a story or a poem, more of an observation)

    BetwINeen's Buddy Icon BetwINeen

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    so true,

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