Death

by Nyomi

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Darkness loomed over the city like a blanket over a scared child.

This darkness did not affect Kyo. Kyo stood in the middle of the street, staring up into space. italic_God, are you there? Are you listening? Please, let me be with you. Take me away from here. I have nothing left._italic

Kyo didn’t dare take his head down, he couldn’t bare to look down the narrow emptiness that surrounded him.

“Kyo! Come inside now!” Kyo’s mother shouted from the doorway. Kyo still stared up at the sky. There seemed to be a star, that was shining brighter than all the rest. Kyo imagined it to be one of God’s eyes. He then closed his own eyes as rain began to fall down.

In a matter of minutes Kyo’s clothes were soaked with rain. The rain hid the tears streaming down Kyo’s cheeks. He heard the screams of his mother, and tried to put his head down to see.

But, by the time he did, the car was already upon him.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    Richard Peck's Buddy Icon Richard Peck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very cool story, I really liked the kind of reverse irony, like people would normally write about someone being “saved” if you know what I mean.

    Have you given harry potter a chance? I read about 100 pages a day, so at this rate I’ll be done by the end of the week. I’m really trying to slow down because i want it to last longer, but I can’t put it down!!!

    Sorry for the preaching, your profile made me gasp.

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    Richard Peck's Buddy Icon Richard Peck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    ^^^^^^^^
    I’m takling about Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows

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    Nyomi's Buddy Icon Nyomi

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Thanks for commenting on both of my ficlets, Richard. I don’t really know, but I don’t really like the Harry Potter series. My dad would kill me if I read them anyway. I tried to read the first one, and it just made me kind of bored.

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    KazeTenshi's Buddy Icon KazeTenshi

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Yeah, Nyomi, give HP a chance xD But you know I’ve told you this before. I love this story, you make me so jelous ;) A 5 again.

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    Richard Peck's Buddy Icon Richard Peck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Yes, the first, I would say 3 HP books are almost childish in a way, but the 5th, 6th, and mos def 7th are like watching a movie you don’t want to end.

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    Richard Peck's Buddy Icon Richard Peck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    And I’m very sorry if it goes against your religion. I know a few people myself who really can’t read it.

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    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    great ficlet. check your italics, but very good ficlet.

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