The Telling

by TotallyNOTBlonde

There we were sitting on the big hill in front of the ocean. The wind was blowing just so the waves very gently crashed against the sharp rocks. I really did not want to be here telling him this. Especially on this beautiful night.
“It’s really pretty tonight, just like you, Delilah” he says. He spoke first.
“Listen Jack, I have to tell you something” I said just loud enough to be heard. I really hate telling him this ‘big news’. We’ve been friends forever and maybe sometimes a little more than friends, but ruining his life at age sixteen! I just couldn’t do that. But he deserves to know so here it goes.
“Wait Delilah, just so you know I love you”. Ohh my gosh is he trying to make this hard?
Now my hearts pounding and I am having trouble breathing a little bit. I take three deep breaths.
“Jack, I’m pregnant!” I nearly shouted. I hope no one heard. I bite my lip as I watch him waiting for his reaction.
“That’s pretty cool, I guess.” He said.
“No Jack, you’re the father!”
The wind halted.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Telling

    The Confused Freshman's Buddy Icon The Confused Freshman

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I liked it. It’s like one of those scenes at the very end of a tv show. It’s has a very good cliffhanger and it made the reader want to know what happened.

  2. The Telling

    //miss mia//'s Buddy Icon //miss mia//

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    i agree 100% with The Confused Freshman above.

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