Message in Lipstick

by Lindsay

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She aimed it at me as she backed toward the door. As Frank got up, he watched what I saw. Mandy took a lipstick tube from somewhere and scrawled something in red across the silver barrel, and put the gun to her temple. She sighed, leaned her head back, smiled, and put a bullet in her head.
Frank took a step backward, took a breath, and walked toward her. He took the gun from her long fingers, and read the elegant cursive. He read it quietly.
“I win.”
“Win what?” I asked.
Suddenly there was a huge bang.

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Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

  1. Message in Lipstick

    `espressotherapy.'s Buddy Icon `espressotherapy.

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    i really like it. this is really well written, but i am a little confused about what actually happened.

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    Fyora Cartagan's Buddy Icon Fyora Cartagan

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I don’t think she wins, I think everybody loses. XD I liked that.

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    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    2.0 out of 5 stars

    Neither of them tried to stop her? And it doesn’t seem like either really cares that she’s dead.

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    Sophia D'Soleil's Buddy Icon Sophia D'Soleil

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    WILL SOMEONE PLEASE EXPLAIN WHAT IS GOING ON !? what did she do, how did she do it, what happened!? all i know is that mandy was manipulating frank and umm richard was it? But i still don’t know why or what for.. explanations would be appreciated…i wannna know what happens next….

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