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Just Like Them

by KazeTenshi

Why did they send me back here? To this remorseful, lonely castle. All alone with the vast pale sky. All alone with the mirror-like lake. All alone with the crumbling, mossy walls.

Kira had been sent back again. To the old private school she used to live at as a little girl. The school where parents sent their children to get them out of their way, standing, very abused and beated, on a low island in the very edges of Ireland.

Why didn’t they want me? Didn’t they care about me at all? They knew I despised this place but they sent me back anyway. To be with the bloody nuns again! The nuns that won’t talk to me, or listen to me. The completely silent nuns. And the rest of the kids. The kids that have always been here, and will always be here. They’ve lost all emotion…

Panic rose in Kira’s chest; she could hear her heart beating wildly. Tears slipped down her pale cheeks, silent as shadows.

Soon I’ll be just like them.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Just Like Them

    Nyomi's Buddy Icon Nyomi

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I hear dramatic music playing. Great job! The first paragraph reminded me of the story you have been writing at school. Is this where the inspiration came from? Tell the father I send him my best.

    5 out of 5 nuns. :)

  2. Just Like Them

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I like the ending – it seems to hint at something paranormal.

  3. Just Like Them

    Kermitgorf's Buddy Icon Kermitgorf

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    As a kid taught by Nun’s, I found this story to be awesome, bloody nuns ....athmosphereric, loved it.

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