As the Ocean Rises (The Sun is Fading)

by [pens&feathers]

There was a spot on the edge of the old boardwalk that was so warn down that it was clearly indented; a single giant thumbprint pressed into the old wood. This was the old jumping-off point, where all of the kids went swimming in the summer. I sat in its smooth concavity, dangling my toes over the edge until they just broke the surface of the water.

In the distance, in the early purple fog of April morning, the old Ferris wheel loomed in the distance. Long out of operation, its red paint sifted to the ground like tainted snow.

Closing my eyes, I could almost smell all of the cotton candy and hot dogs and paper cups of fresh clam chowder. Could almost hear the haunting melody of carnival music. Almost feel myself getting swept along the crowd, pressed between warm summer bodies as the fireworks bloomed overhead on the Fourth of July.

I came to the end of the boardwalk to remember what it was like when we were young and happy and innocent.

“I thought I might find you here,” said a voice behind me.

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  1. As the Ocean Rises (The Sun is Fading)

    Batak Beatrix's Buddy Icon Batak Beatrix

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love the descriptions.

  2. As the Ocean Rises (The Sun is Fading)

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I loved how peacefully you wrote this, yet with an air of mystery. Like one, very quiet note of dissonance in an otherwise beautiful chord.

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