No-one

by MissJonas1492

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“No-one’s there,” I’d say.
“No-one’s coming.”

“Are you sure about that?” He’d say

“No-one cares,” I’d say.
“No-one knows.”

“Are you sure about that?” He’d say

“No-one’s listening,” I’d say
“No-one wants to.”

“Are you sure about that?” He’d say.

Today I said:
“No-one loves me!”

“Are you sure about that?” He said.

“Why do you keep asking me that?!”

“Because no-one’s there, and no-ones coming, and no-one cares, and no-one knows, and no-one’s listening, and no-one wants to, and no-one loves you. Who’s no-one?”

“No-one is—“

But I didn’t have the chance to finish that sentence because right then he kissed me. A fragile, delicate, don’t-open-your-eyes-for-fear-that-its-a-hallucination kiss. Then he looked deep into my eyes and said:

“I’m your no-one.”

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    [pens&feathers]'s Buddy Icon [pens&feathers]

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    So sweet! Excellent job!

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    Batak Beatrix's Buddy Icon Batak Beatrix

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Aaw, how cute!

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    SunEyedGirl's Buddy Icon SunEyedGirl

    Posted 11 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    very cute

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    MissJonas1492's Buddy Icon MissJonas1492

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i agree, i find it rather cute but a bit predictable. you know right from the start what will happen in the end. I must say, not my best work. =(

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    Hannah Faith's Buddy Icon Hannah Faith

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Still, it is so sweet!! And think in some way or another every one can relate. Heh.

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    starcrossed's Buddy Icon starcrossed

    Posted 11 months ago

    Very delightful—and sometimes it’s nice to write something predictable yet lovely at the same time. Also, it probably seems more predictable to you because you wrote it and knew where you wanted it to go.

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    MissJonas1492's Buddy Icon MissJonas1492

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    its like one of those fairy-tale romances I’ve always dreamed about

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    xtremepoison's Buddy Icon xtremepoison

    Posted 10 months ago

    so sweet ‘so needs a sequel

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