too many times.

by //miss mia//

There was once a very very rich teenage girl. she was 17. living in an extremely large house that most would call a mansion with her mother. her father had gotten in trouble with the law and went to jail. the mother had the money to bail the father out of jail easily. she just didn’t want to. nobody understood it. people talked. rumors were started. the press took pictures and wrote news articles about it. the mother became known throughout the world for her selfish deed. she was called “Selfish, ungrateful, messed up, stupid, careless, ” and so much more… the young girl was thought of as her mother also. according to people throughout the world, she was going to be pointless in life.
3 hours after watching another episode of the news about her and her mother… she wrote in her diary. it said “is it really so selfish, ungrateful, messed up, stupid, and careless of us to keep a man behind bars who continuously threatened my life, and too many times, almost ended it?”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

  1. too many times.

    Storybook Endings' Buddy Icon Storybook Endings

    Posted 11 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Well I’m no renowned writer so who am i to judge you, huh. But i do think you’ve got a nice style. I can’t tell how old you are, but keep at it. Love the twist at the end.

  2. too many times.

    The Ghost in the Machine's Buddy Icon The Ghost in the Machine

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    likin the context write more bout this good start

  3. too many times.

    User 3580's Buddy Icon User 3580

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    oooh my, I wonder why the mother wouldn’t just tell the news/police about the father? and she’s actually selfless keeping in there for her childs sake.
    good job!

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