They're coming

by Aaron McCall

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But before the man was able to pick up the flashlight from the cot a Dog began to bark. “they’re coming for us.” “I think I hear something comin in on the telly” the people in the stadium fell silent as they turned to listen to the old mans walkman handheld. Through the static, was the barley audible voice of Van Mantra

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. They're coming

    Richard Peck's Buddy Icon Richard Peck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Hey, I thought this was a pretty cool direction you took it. I wasen’t expecting it, but i like it. Be sure to check your notes! (Right next to the signout button)

  2. They're coming

    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Cool… Short, but an interesting direction to take. All hail Van Mantra – somehow I think he may not turn out to be the hero we’re all expecting? Kind of depends what is written next, eh? : ) A worthy read.

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