too close 3

by Dr. Lew

I would have told him, if he hadn’t thought, I really wish this kid would leave me alone.
“Um… err… here’s your pencil,” I replied, trying to look as stern as possible .
Mike seemed surprised in my lack of enthusiasm in greeting him. (Usually I prance around him, showing off for the girls and such.) Well, I was mad at him for thinking insulting thoughts. Today, instead of flitting around him when he went to his locker, I went straight to mine. A girl was standing next to my locker, and I was about to ask her what she was doing there, when I realized she was at her locker.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

  1. too close 3

    //miss mia//'s Buddy Icon //miss mia//

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    the first and second Too Close were really good. I enjoyed this one also… but the end of this one i didn’t understand. i got the beginning of it, just not how she was staring at her locker… even tho the main character thought that it was his locker…. is he dead? i mean… lol…i just don’t get it. maybe you could leave a note for me to understand it?

  2. too close 3

    TotallyNOTBlonde's Buddy Icon TotallyNOTBlonde

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    These were really good! Will you write another sequel? (It is kinda confusing though)

  3. too close 3

    Dr. Lew's Buddy Icon Dr. Lew

    Posted about 1 year ago

    wait for the sequel

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