Not now, not like this

by Kamalani

Interruption before response: first a crash, then a scream. Bathroom window. Her scream.

I dropped the tackle box I’d been packing, scattering lures and lines across the linoleum. Down the hall into the bathroom. Pat on the floor, eyes shut. A shadow jumped out the window.

The degeneration has begun. No thoughts of justice, just of Pat.

Not now, not like this.

I reached down with as much delicacy as haste, put my fingers to her neck and my cheek to her mouth. Pulse and breathing. Only fainted.

Amongst the glass is a pearl. The thief took her pearl necklace: last year’s big 25th anniversary gift, made from Tahitian black pearls.

The trip to Tahiti, an event worth the memory. A year before the End and we were off playing hedonist, just like everyone else.

A week of play amongst years of making a life. Seems so irrelevant now.

But the end is the same. Retirement. A small piece of rest at the end of a hard life. Pat’s eyes fluttered open.

“No dear, we’re going to be awake for this.”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Not now, not like this

    Saffron's Buddy Icon Saffron

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Very nice tone!

  2. Not now, not like this

    Podge Dirkins' Buddy Icon Podge Dirkins

    Posted about 1 year ago

    I agree, this does some nice stuff.

  3. Not now, not like this

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 8 months ago

    Wow, amazingly tender in its tragedy. Kind of allegorical feel to it, the end of life as we know it on the planet and the end of life as we know it because of retirement and that change in life. Or perhaps I reading too much into it.
    LoA

  4. Not now, not like this

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    Posted 7 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree, nice tone!
    LoA

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