Competition Starts NOW!

by TotallyNOTBlonde

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We were all in ‘the’ yard again. I was a little tired because I couldn’t sleep thinking about Ty which sounds kinda weird but Teddy never told me what Ty said! Arrrg! Teddy upsets me sometimes, weell actually a lot. When my team was up to bat ( yes baseball again) I decieded to ask him.
“Teddy my man!” I said quite loud and started walking over to him.
“Soooo what did Ty say?” I said kinda sounding excited. Big mistake.
“Well I don’t really remember quite what he said” Teddy started.
“Teddy if you don’t tell me right now I will tell everyone who you like. Wouldn’t that be a great kodak moment?” I asked him.
“You wouldn’t?”
“Try me.” I replied with a sneaky grin.
“Fine.” He sighed. “He said your the biggest competition he ever ever had. He said he has to watch your every move and learn your weaknesses and strengths.”
“Ohh” I smiled weakly.
Then Teddy added “And he may have a teeny, itsy, bitsy crush on you.”

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Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

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    //miss mia//'s Buddy Icon //miss mia//

    Posted about 1 year ago

    haha nice. i love how u (and teddy i guess)made it sound like Ty wasn’t interested in Lindsey but then it was clear again that he was interested in her. great waiy to add the suspense. i think tho that like, you could have put more details and such into the story. but that is something that you can work on. but otherwise good job!!

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    TotallyNOTBlonde's Buddy Icon TotallyNOTBlonde

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I probably will rewrite all these like 4 myself adding detail and stuff like that.

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    artistgirlk's Buddy Icon artistgirlk

    Posted 12 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    um, consult a grammar expert if u can.

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    Dr. Lew's Buddy Icon Dr. Lew

    Posted 11 months ago

    way to be rude, 4407; its a great story

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    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 11 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    It is a cute story, but it does need grammar help.

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    FlirtingWithaBrickWall's Buddy Icon FlirtingWithaBrickWall

    Posted 11 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    very stream of consciousness

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    Nissakit's Buddy Icon Nissakit

    Posted 3 months ago

    i liked the story good job!

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