Climbing Fences

by [pens&feathers]

I’ve fallen into step with you and your electric green eyes
Broken through the fortress and the clever disguise
So you locked down your heart and you swallowed the key
And here I stand with empty hands and broken memories
You’ve built a wall between us –
and I’ve never been good at climbing fences

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  1. Climbing Fences

    Richard Peck's Buddy Icon Richard Peck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like the clever rhymes and the sad, but funny last line. Great poem!

  2. Climbing Fences

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love the last line. The rhythm in it is also great, it amazes me how people can do that!

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