Killing the Monster

by Pearls and Formaldehyde

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Ashes to ashes
Dust to dust
With this stake
I deal the pain of the just

You’ve killed too many
Who didn’t have a clue
You’re a monster without a soul
They didn’t hold a candle to you

But you made a mistake
Because you didn’t kill me
And now I’ve tracked you down
To slay you with glee

You took my voice
You took my face
So now I’ve come
To be rid of you, every little trace

But my hand stills
This deed I cannot do
It would be so much easier
If I didn’t love you…

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  1. Killing the Monster

    Richard Peck's Buddy Icon Richard Peck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very good & clever rhymes. It really tells a story. I like your name as well.

  2. Killing the Monster

    //miss mia//'s Buddy Icon //miss mia//

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    IT ROCKS !! and the good thing about it is it actually makes sense to me… most poems don’t make sense to me but this definately definately makes sense, and i definately definately love it. i hope to see lots more from u.

  3. Killing the Monster

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Awesome twist at the end!

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