The Sovereign Marshall

by Stovohobo

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High in the Grand Tower, soaring above every other building in the City, sat the Sovereign Marshall. The young ruler could sit in his jewel-studded chair and view the vistas of his glorious City from his penthouse.

Today, the Marshall’s normally perfectly smooth face wore a crease. “Judge Dench.”

An obviously affluent man drew up behind him. “What is it, Your Sovereignty?”

“What news is there of the Endless Corridor?”

“The Corridor is going along as planned, Your Sovereignty. Builder 405 has recently died, but we have found a certified male named Dali to take his place.”

“Excellent. Has the normal procedure been performed?”

“Of course, Your Sovereignty. The family remains ignorant. Our gifts were too much.

“However, files have leaked through to us; it seems Dali’s previous actions go against him. I suggest we keep a close eye on him. We cannot afford any disturbances of the Corridor; we could lose control of the City.”

“Dismissed.” He must keep an eye on this Dali. . . .

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  1. The Sovereign Marshall

    Fyora Cartagan's Buddy Icon Fyora Cartagan

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Dali…like the (I’m not sure of his actual nationality) Hispanic painter?
    Very interesting continuation

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    //miss mia//'s Buddy Icon //miss mia//

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    haha good good. nobody could do it better.

  3. The Sovereign Marshall

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Fyora—Gosh dang it I knew I’d heard the name somewhere! I believe his first name was Salvador(e?), but can’t remember if he was a painter or not. = /

    Mia—Thank you!

  4. The Sovereign Marshall

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted about 1 year ago

    I’m stickin with the name whether ya like it er not! =D

  5. The Sovereign Marshall

    Nouvelle Bardot's Buddy Icon Nouvelle Bardot

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    guilty of stalking again, but the title sort of caught my eye, and the dali (reference?) or name made me cum with cuteness, as fritz would say.

    anyway, keep this going, i’m intrigued.

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    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very intruiging. The question burns inside my head ; “What purpose does the Endless Corridor serve?”

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    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I still wonder what the Endless Corridor connects, and where it begins, but I like the wat you’ve set up the opposition.

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