He Loved That Piano

by Laine P. Grey

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He lived with his piano. Played each night before bed. He loved his piano.

One day he found a little bird, asleep in the white keys. Get off my lovely piano! But it just stayed right there.

He lived with his piano. Played each night before bed. He loved his piano.

The bird woke to look at him. Wondered where he was. Get off my lovely piano! But it just stayed right there.

He lived with his piano. Played each night before bed. He loved his piano.

He grew to love that little bird;the one that stayed there. He sing to it each night before bed.

He lived with his bird, and his piano. Sang and played before bed. He loved, he loved that piano. And that little bird.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. He Loved That Piano

    partysprinkles' Buddy Icon partysprinkles

    Posted about 1 year ago

    endearing :]

  2. He Loved That Piano

    starcrossed's Buddy Icon starcrossed

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    that’s darling

  3. He Loved That Piano

    BARomero's Buddy Icon BARomero

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Only songs like these
    Played in minor keys
    Keep those memories
    Holdin’ on….

  4. He Loved That Piano

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Lovely, and the use of repetition was quite poetic. I want to write a sequel, but I don’t think I could do it justice.

  5. He Loved That Piano

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree with THX 0477 , the repetition was great, it showed you the development throughout the piece.

  6. He Loved That Piano

    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted about 1 month ago

    I agree with the above two, repetition is usually bad, but this is pretty good. Brilliance.

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