Hiding from the 'Monster'

by Officially

Max winked at me, pulling more fury out of the other girl. “I’m getting a soda,” I said, and Max nodded, turning to talk to one of the guys behind him as I left to the snack table.

As soon as he was preoccupied with the conversation I snuck off to the bathroom. It was empty, luckily, and I stepped in and locked the door behind me. You know those scenes in monster movies where the person running away gets into a room, locks the door behind them, leans against it and waits in silence for a moment, holding their breath?

Then they hear the monster or killer walk by, and let out a sigh of relief, begin breathing again, and slide down the door into a seating position, still leaning against the door.

I did that exact thing, minus the listening for the monster or killer. For me the monster was the party.

So there I hid from the party, in there for at least half an hour until someone knocked loudly on the door. “Can you please hurry a little?” I sighed and left my fort, going to get that soda.

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  1. Hiding from the 'Monster'

    TotallyNOTBlonde's Buddy Icon TotallyNOTBlonde

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    these stories r pretty sweet!!

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    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    another good one

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    Brebelles' Buddy Icon Brebelles

    Posted 12 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Yuppers. Great stories. RATE MINE 2 !!! PLEASE I want ppls opinions. Creative critism is ALWAYS appreciated.

  4. Hiding from the 'Monster'

    Dr. Mousse's Buddy Icon Dr. Mousse

    Posted 8 months ago

    ha. sounds like me. lol

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