Smiles

by Officially

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I looked up at him quickly. Yeah, he was in my math class. Sat two rows in front of me, three seats to the right.

Max often accused me of, for someone that hated being in contact with people, someone that noticed everyone. Maybe that was because I’d gotten used to not being noticed myself.

I nodded as I looked him over. For some reason he reminded me of Max. I didn’t have any idea why. His eyes were green rather than brown, his hair was a lot lighter, and he was closer to my height than Max’s. They didn’t look anything alike. This guy’s nose was even slightly crooked as if it had been broken once or twice.

“Cool. I don’t think I’ve seen you at a party before. I’m Jake,” he said, offering me a hand. I stared at him, not giving him my hand in return, something that clearly made him uncomfortable.

During this time I realized what reminded me of Max. His smile. Their smiles didn’t really look the same at all, but they had the same emotion behind them. I smiled back and shook his hand.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Smiles

    TotallyNOTBlonde's Buddy Icon TotallyNOTBlonde

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Ohh how cute! The smiles!

  2. Smiles

    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted 12 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    that was cute

  3. Smiles

    Brebelles' Buddy Icon Brebelles

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like the smiles part. thats adorable. RATE MINE 2 !!! PLEASE I want ppls opinions. Creative critism is ALWAYS appreciated.

  4. Smiles

    Dr. Mousse's Buddy Icon Dr. Mousse

    Posted 8 months ago

    aww. i sense a relationship coming on.

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