The Turn

by TotallyNOTBlonde

We walked into my house. It was empty just like it always is during the day. I walked into the living room and sat on the couch. He sat next to me. I snuggled into him like I had done before and I turned to kiss him. He kissed back but only for a moment and then he stopped.
“I can’t do this to you Lindsay.”He said and stood up. That was the first time I had been called by my first name since second grade.
“What’s the problem?”I asked.
“It’s a joke.”
“What”I questioned him.
“You’re pretty, nice, fun, athletic but this is all a joke. The guys told me if I could like get you to like soften up and be more beautiful they would be nice to me in school. You know make me cool, but once I learned how nice and beautiful you really were I couldn’t do it. I was becoming attached to you. I like you Linz, a lot. Please forgive me.”He told this whole story me getting madder and madder.
“Get out”I screamed. He ran outside alpoligizing like crazy. The boys want beautiful and soft I’ll show’em beautiful and soft.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Turn

    Officially's Buddy Icon Officially

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I sense a plot, and payback. Mua ha ha ha.
    Keep ‘em coming.

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    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    how could he???? leaves me wanting the next one.

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    IheartSoccer x10's Buddy Icon IheartSoccer x10

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Omg I knew that guy was a creep! He’s a creepy Andy!!!!!!!

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    User 4136's Buddy Icon User 4136

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice turn!!!!!!! keep them coming :-)

  5. The Turn

    User 4137's Buddy Icon User 4137

    Posted 11 months ago

    creep! how could he do that????OMG!!!!!!!

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    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    !!! BAD TY !!!!!!
    well at least you know how much teh readers like the stories if they respond so passionately…like me…lol

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    TY
    I
    HATE
    YOU !!!!!!!!!

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    Dr. Lew's Buddy Icon Dr. Lew

    Posted 10 months ago

    “growl”

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    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 10 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    Um, why’s everyone mad at Ty?
    He didn’t know her when he took this bet, or whatever.
    Her best friends on the other hand, set it up! And wanted videotape of it!
    Creepy, bad friends!

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    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    well, using anybody like that, whether you know them or not, is low. man, that’s just low.

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