She Leaves for College, Take One

by [pens&feathers]

When I got there, she was sitting cross-legged in the middle of the empty room, surrounded by cardboard boxes. She was wearing two different colored flip-flops.

She was holding a smaller box in her lap, and looking over her shoulder I could see that it was filled with papers and pictures. With a start I realized most of them were covered with my own handwriting.

“You know,” she said, not turning around, “I always thought I’d want to go. I always thought I’d be flying out that door.”

By the shaking of her shoulders, I knew she was crying. And I wanted to just take her up in my arms and tell her it’d be okay. But I didn’t. Because I knew that if I let myself fall in love with her it would tear us both apart.

But with my heart already breaking, I realized that I already had.

“But now,” she continued, getting up to look at me, “I don’t want to ever leave. How is that fair?”

I looked into her hazel eyes for a long moment.

“It’s not,” I said. And I hated myself for walking out the door.

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  1. She Leaves for College, Take One

    Laine the Grey's Buddy Icon Laine the Grey

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I want a sequel.

  2. She Leaves for College, Take One

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Me 2sies!!

  3. She Leaves for College, Take One

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like the imagery, and I also would a sequel. Or, perhaps a prequel.

  4. She Leaves for College, Take One

    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    a sequel would be very very very nice. very. fae’s right; really nice imagery here.

  5. She Leaves for College, Take One

    antisheep's Buddy Icon antisheep

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I think i’d probably prefer a prequel actually! this seems an interesting start to a kind of backwards story to me… I find myself dying to know what’s on those pieces of paper… love notes, just correspondence… i just want to know…

    Well done =)

  6. She Leaves for College, Take One

    T.F. Torrey's Buddy Icon T.F. Torrey

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow. You are setting the ficlet bar pretty high lately. With this, you’ve been bumped from contact to muse, but I bet you get that a lot. Keep up the great work!

  7. She Leaves for College, Take One

    [pens&feathers]'s Buddy Icon [pens&feathers]

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Thank you everybody!!

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