Road Trip

by Storykeeper of Fae

“Lessa! Take that poor raisin out of the sun, please! We don’t want it to dry up entirely!” He shouted. Whatever. I’ve just learned to go with the flow. He gets passionate about strange things soemtimes, and tends to yell. I think I’m partly deaf now, because of it. It is a truth universally acknowledged that he’s a crazy man. Well, perhaps not universally, but by anyone who’s ever known him.

I went to take the raisin out of the sun. Boy is it hot! How did I manage to wake cold this morning? I put the thought aside as I placed the raisin on the car dash board. I hate road trips. I think they’d be alright if Dad didn’t make me get out and do some random thing every five minutes. It’s almost as bad as whitewashing that stupid fence. My friends all leave town the second week of July to avoid any risk of being suckered into helping me. They’re just too smart.

I try to fall asleep, but as soon as I start nodding off, he wakes me up. “1,345!” he exclaims.
1,345 miles to go before I sleep.

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    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted about 1 year ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    Jane Austen, Mark Twain, Anne McCaffrey, Robert Frost, Langston Hughes/Lorraine Hansberry. You can guess the works, they’re really obvious, even though I didn’t use direct quotes.

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    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted about 1 year ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    Were we supposed to use direct quotes?

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    FlirtingWithaBrickWall's Buddy Icon FlirtingWithaBrickWall

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i think direct quotes were optional. i love the robert frost allusion.

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    Amaster's Buddy Icon Amaster

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    The only ones I have any idea about the works are Mark Twain and Anne McCaffrey, Tom Sawyer, and Dragonflight. The others I’ve no idea on.

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    Posted 4 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    There was A Raisin in the Sun, Pride and Prejudice and “Walking Through Woods on a Snowy Evening”.

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